Great job on this assignment! I know for me this was probably the hardest one so far. I like the idea of adding the booklet to explain why it is important. The only thing that professor Pryor wanted that you didn't include was the price of the product. But your hook and presentation was really good.
Great video! I loved your hook and how animated you were throughout the pitch. I agree with Faith that I would have liked to know a little bit about prices, even if you didn't know exactly what they should be yet. I also like how you pull on people's ethical side by talking about why we need to do something to help the environment . I look forward to hearing more about your business plan throughout the course of the class.
Good afternoon Steven,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this assignment! I know for me this was probably the hardest one so far. I like the idea of adding the booklet to explain why it is important. The only thing that professor Pryor wanted that you didn't include was the price of the product. But your hook and presentation was really good.
Hey Steven,
ReplyDeleteGreat video! I loved your hook and how animated you were throughout the pitch. I agree with Faith that I would have liked to know a little bit about prices, even if you didn't know exactly what they should be yet. I also like how you pull on people's ethical side by talking about why we need to do something to help the environment . I look forward to hearing more about your business plan throughout the course of the class.