My peers both mentioned that I had forgot to include or mention a price in my first elevator pitch. One also mentioned that I should try to touch on consumers' empathy towards the environment.
I tried to accomplish both of these things by giving my product a $12.98 price, as well as speaking more onto the potential environmental damage a consumer is doing by not purchasing my product.
Hello Steven,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on listening to the feedback and adding it in! I also liked that you seem to have the pitch memorized. I know the professor said to not add our name but I personally had a hard time taking it out and still keep the same flow.
Hi Steven,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was very well put together. You touched on all important aspects, the importance of this product, how it will benefit people, and how easy your product is to use. Your closing statement was very powerful, however I think that if you add just a tad bit more of conviction when you speak, your pitch would be even better.